Cool!!
I agree with you when you say you shoud make it longer, it does need a bit more length to it, however if you do make it longer maybe add some more substance as it seemed a bit empty at points.
The sounds all work together fantastically and all blend and combine flawlessly. The loop is great as i couldnt even tell where it looped when i listened to it. Nice song and i hope to hear more original stuff like this from you!
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