Hey There YoinK
This was pretty good and quite funny lol, ive heard a few parodys of this song, and this is probably the second best one ive heard, the best was "Hey There Khalila", lets start with this though. This is definately more suitable for Newgrounds than the original version lol.
The lyrics need a bit of work, the syllables dont match with that of the original song so at alot of parts it doesnt quite fit. Also the lyrics could of been a little better, if you had thought some of them through a bit longer you may of been able to come up with better lyrics, rather than going with "Who drank the rum?" and "I'm rasing my right eyebrow" they dont really make sense lol.
The guitar work is good, its a fairly simple tune and i learned it myself on guitar, sounds pretty clean throughout the song though. So well done on that. Your singing isnt bad, a little flat at some parts but other than that its not bad. I have trouble singing and playing guitar at the same time lol. The chorus was probably the best sung part in the song. the ending was kinda werid though, sounded like a mix of a Transformer and Darth Vader lol.
Overall it was a pretty cool song, nice parody but maybe you need to work out the kinks a bit. Id advise you to maybe do some more parody songs as this one was pretty good. Hope to see more from you man. Peace out!
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